A poem about loss and gain.
The Winnowing Way
The Winnowing Way
As
the wind blows,
each
secret shows.
What
was hidden
is
made manifest.
What
did we sow?
What
did we grow?
Have
we been cursed,
or
are we blessed?
Touched
by the breeze,
blown
through the trees.
Not
what we sought,
we
have received.
Shells
come away,
dropped
to decay.
Pests
tossed as well,
grant
us reprieve.
How
have we erred,
lost
in the air?
Were
these pieces
not
parts of us?
Cruelly
they fall,
tumbling
all,
onto
the ground
without
a fuss.
What
is revealed,
fit
for a meal,
it
is the grain
that
was contained.
Were
it not tossed,
this
would be lost.
For
every gain,
there
is a loss.
What
do we mourn?
Why
be forlorn?
It
was the husk
hiding
the corn.
Naught
did we waste,
now
we can taste.
What
was concealed,
now
we embrace.
These
are the things,
each
season brings.
Showers
will fall,
upon
us all.
What
will be grown,
shall
be made known.
For
questions asked,
we
will be shown.
As
the wind blows,
each
secret shows.
Soft
it arrives,
swiftly
it goes.
What
will we sow?
What
will we grow?
All
of our deeds
one
day will show.
This is very well written and has a haunting rhythm to it. It is nice to see you throw a creative endeavor up on your blog.
ReplyDeletePoetry is all about economy of words. Use only what you need to communicate. Anything more would be extraneous.
DeleteFantastic poem! Lots of tranquil imagery comes to mind as I read it, the words are very introspective. Personal growth and loss, as well as our life's journey all summed up in beautiful verse.
ReplyDeleteA picture is worth a thousand words. If you can use them to paint one, there are greater depths to be seen. Sometimes, we lose the things we no longer need.
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